Published On: September 13, 2022

26 thoughts on “Chapter 1: Page 8

  1. Now what comes next..

    1. We shall see! Maybe they go home and play video games 😀

  2. Holy crap that’s a BIG ass rat. They better get out of there now

    1. It is a BIG rat indeed haha! Oh yeah, if it’s hostile they better watch out

  3. WHAT IS THAT ?😧 I hope the girls get home okay!

  4. That was a compelling chapter I’m on the edge of my seat!!! ”Nasty”, the water looks breathtaking instead of nasty if you ask me.

    1. Thanks!! I’m real excited to show yall what’s coming!

  5. The mom’s about to beat her ass rofl

    1. She doesn’t know her mom’s already awake 😭😭

  6. It’s all coming together but…the skull 😰

  7. Hmm, Bubble Man did warn them not to use the elevators, have to wonder what could be waiting on the other side of thsoe doors… or maybe he just didn’t want them disturbing his pet rat and skull!

    1. That’s a great point! They must of either forgotten or ignoring his warning haha. Oo I can’t wait to show yall what’s coming 😀

  8. uuuugh “freakin’ nasty” indeed!
    So they found the way out. Maybe. I have a bad feeling somehow.. But who knows, maybe we’ve got luck this time (?)

    Rat! …errr .. wait … Dog! … Rat-Dog!!

    1. Right? Poor sleepy, but then Porcia’s over there without a care or shoes haha! Oh yeah don’t blame you, there’s definitely some foreboding vibes :O . RatDog has to be it’s official name now LOL

  9. HmmmMMm…interesting o.o

    1. Glad ya think so :D, it’ll get even more interesting haha

  10. ⭐️Treck⭐️

    These girls are badasses. I’m worried for them though

    1. They both are the kind to do something if you tell ’em it’s not something they should do lol. Porcia out of curioustiy and adventure, Sleepy to spite people telling her what to do lmao

  11. I find this webtoon story so far very captivating!!!! It’s dark and creepy but not in an over the top way, lots of tension and fear for these girls (I fuqqin love their designs–so pointy and simple?? in a good way 🙂 ) . It looks like their mom is gonna kick her butt 😡👊. Her mom is the only one that Porcia fears is funny and ironic. if she survives these tunnels I hope ahh any news on next update?

    1. Thanks so much! 😀 . That means a lot I’m so glad you like this story. That’s exactly the tone I was going for here in the beginning. This story will have both light and dark elements haha, and will get much darker at times but I didn’t want to dive into that level of darkness out the gate 🙂 . Thank you! I am heavily inspired by the anime/manga Hunter x Hunter’s designs in that regard. Lol, her mom is the one she fears most XD. Thanks again for reading, and next update is nearly done I’ll add a date when it’s close, probably a week or so from now 🙂

  12. Curious

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