Published On: July 2, 2025

26 thoughts on “Chapter 2: Page 4

  1. I like how villainous some of these characters seem even if they’re on Porcia’s “side”. Lavavoth is fucking intimidating and sketchy. Ashley’s magnificent tho 💀.

    1. Yeah I can tell you on this page there are some pretty morally questionable people on the “royal” side lol. I find them all fun though in their own way. Fun fact, Lava boy’s sort of a vestigial from the last regime, that Lucia has a hard time getting rid of because he’s Iri’s brother (and Lucia likes Iri), and also cause he’s related to someone on the Grand Council!

      I like Ashley too! It’s funny how Lavavoth says they’re young but Ashley’s like 40 lmao. Lavavoth’s not that much older. All the other soldiers are 19-24 years old, though so he’s not wrong there lol

  2. The worldbuilding is on another level! Looks like we see how Dick Dastardly hypnotized the soldiers….

    1. Thank you so much!! I can tell you that while I love doing it these kind of pages drain my life energy LMAO.

      Y’know it’s real funny you call that person Dick Dastardly. That kind of character, just might be more apt to explaining their behavior than yall know yet ;D

  3. Iri is scary. But sexy.

    1. Haha, a very accurate description! Fun fact she and Lavavoth were one of the first iteration of this stories first antagonists. Iri is also heavily inspired by Azula lol. But I do like Iri, she is a bit scary, but does ultimately operate on a desire for justice…hopefully. LMAO.

  4. These are a colourful cast of characters :O

    1. Thank you!! Glad to hear, I agree lol

  5. Also, if this masked dude was able to stay under the radar this easily, they can’t be as “competent” as you say Lavavoth. Or maybe bird mask is just THAT good? Even if I had a hypnosis cube I don’t know if I’d be skilled enough to evade a countries entire security force while manipulating animals to kill people 🤔. But that might just be a skill issue.

    1. Very great point! It will be interesting to eventually show how they’ve stayed under the radar. Yes there’s definitely some dysfunction…corruption, and incompetence in security and the military but generally they have never had a problem with serial killers due to how much crazy survelliance they have. And also just having good social and cultural support systems. Relative to a lot of other Paradises they have a decent record atm.

      This case has gotten this far, mostly because there’s some very creative things the perpetrators are doing to make all it work, it’s actually not even immediately obvious yet with the info I’ve given. Though there’s major components and breadcrums so far!

      Also that’s a good guess at what they’re doing haha. Man…it’s gonna get nuts, can’t wait to show y’all what happens near the end of this case.

  6. She’s dead…

    1. It’s not looking good for Maka!

  7. GHaDaA 🧜🏻‍♀️

    WTF 😭😭 They’re so goofy. I’m dyin

  8. He’s racist

    1. Lavavoth? I’m not gonna lie to ya he’s low key a fascist so not unlikely there 😭. Though here he seems to be ,at least on face value, focused more on his metric of success rather than the soldiers demographics. This paradise is probably the most diverse in general, especially it’s military :O

  9. So I’m not the only one who thought the lotion line was weird

    1. Lmao Kaycen’s a little strange

  10. My god this is incredible. The art and 3D backgrounds are so detailed, and the story is fascinating. Looks like the military is about to go in. I don’t like their chances.

    1. Thank you so much!! Means a lot :D.

      Yeah, I can say that a lot of these goofy soldiers are actually quite skilled. In terms of just a fight, the perpetrator(s) and the monsters don’t stand much of a chance if they had to say fight one squad in a fair fight. But everything about the happenings in the tunnel are underhanded and visually deceitful, so things could get messy!

  11. What in the world spirit frequency cedar oil?

    1. The cedar oil thing I believe is actually useful as tick repellent if I’m not wrong, haven’t tried it lol. I just use whatever’s on the shelf at walmart. But the spirit frequency stuff, I couldn’t tell you what the heck he’s talking about. He’s a good guy, but a complete madman lmao.

  12. Her eyes pierce into my soul.

    1. If I saw someone with pupils like that irl, I’d find them cool, but also midly terrifying haha.

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