Binged this webtoon (is this a webtoon?) it’s so dark and interesting but also funny and sarcastic. The 3D BACKGROUNDS and character designs ahhh it’s cute how Porcia wants to solve this mystery but I get more and more worried for them. I’m scratching my head what made Sleepy hate the military so much?? To make matters worse that mask man is creeping on them omggg
Ahhh I’m so glad to hear that I’m glad you enjoyed it thank you for binging!
It is technically webtoon style, but it’s going to be on webtoons sometime soon! Just tweaking earlier pages. I’m always happy some of y’all find this site I only advertise it on Instagram and soon comicAd haha.
Yeah Sleepy has bad experiences with the military in her hometown! We’ll see lots more on that later, she’s going along with this cause she’s real good friends with Porcia!
This update was briloliant!! Answered a lot of my questions about the military and what earlier scenes meant. I read your other story ‘Live Yasha’ and I can’t help but notice Lin and Sin are both similar in a few ways. Cocky guys with green pallets. Can’t wait for the next update.
I’m glad you think so thank you Henson!! I’m glad it answered those questions :D, plan to answer some and raise a few more haha.
LOL that’s a really funny point. Their names are even similar. I’d say you’re spot on, only difference is Lin really very rarely gets angry, he’s a smooth salesman type lol. Sin is a bit of a hothead but also has that confidence whether earned or not xD. I like them both lol
Can’t wait to show y’all what’s next! A bit of a glimpse at Porcia and Sleepy’s relationship, her fear of her leaving her! Thanks for reading/commenting 😀
Thank you so much!!tbh I really haven’t even gotten close to showing some of my fav parts of this story yet (i must find ways to clone myself lol) ,so it’s really great to hear y’all like the worldbuilding/dialogue :D.
Iri is intimidating, she has a very strong sense of justice and takes her job really seriously haha, but she can be nice too if she thinks you’re not a fool lmao. Iri’s def pretty I don’t blame you XD
Lin is going to die the moment we’re introduced to him LMAO. I find Sleepy fascinating, she’s snarky but seems to know more than she lets on. Btw I reread and had my mind blown…you really thought of every little detail didn’t you.
He had a few quips right XD. Nah he’ll be fine…maybe lol.
Oh wow always great to hear someone reading let alone rereading it! Thank you that means so much! full disclosure all my stories are part of my constant obsessive daydreams/paracosm so i put a lot of thought into it whether i like to or not XD.
I really appreciate it though I hope to do some crazy foreshadowing in the future, hopefully it pays off!
Yeah I’ve always been building multiple paracosms since I was little. I was very introverted and artsy haha, and they just fascinate me. When I told a friend about this he was like “what the hell how is that possible”, he’s super smart and into physics and stuff but can’t conceive making Lord of the Rings esque style worlds in your head and I’m like “it’s so easy bro” XD. Now I’m doing a lot of random things these days but the habit just never stops if that makes sense? It’s just something I can always do and build which is why I can be a bit air headed lol. I love it though it I wonder if lots of people have paracosms!
Great point! this is Paradise 003, there’s lots of Paradises and I can tell you many of them are pretty dystopian lol. Paradises in general have gotten marginally better overall for but they also only have livable conditions cause of some exploitation and other dark shenanigans going on under the rug somewhere else.
This Paradise is legitamately a decent place to live for most of the people here mostly thanks to Lucia and others leadership but also just verrryy lucky circumstances and favoritism from the grand council (they get invested a lot more!).
We’ll see more dark underbelly stuff in Paradise 002, I really can’t wait 😀
Y’all obviously can’t hear it but the way Makana (that soldier) said it did have a bit of a condescending accusatory tone to it and she was looking directly at Sleepy too. Sleepy does not like being overanalyzed or interrogated by the military for reasons we’ll see. But yeah these soldiers aren’t doing anything too unreasonable, Sleepy is just on edge 🙂
34 thoughts on “Chapter 2: Page 7”
sovember
Thanks for reading!
The first few pages of Chapter 1 are being touched up! Chapter 1: Page 2 will be done real soon! You can see the progress in the link below 🙂
Ana Harris
Iri is so pretty. It looks like she’s about to cause another murder heu heu heu
sovember
I love Iri too though it’d be terrifying working for her haha!
rukia18
That’s all very cool but UM what’s up with demonic news reporter 😂😂
sovember
A lot of news reporters in this world are callous psychopaths that trivialize events the MC’s go through, don’t know how or why I made it that way lol
HappyHop🐠
its kinda weird Lin kept Erie out of her office. i get sketchy vibes from him he’s too calm!!! also also porcia is adorable 😊
sovember
Yeah what’s up with Lin? Maybe he’s just a clumsy guy, maybe he’s got bad intentions =O
우주야
the face of nightmares
sovember
Terrifying face indeed !
Lyly the Editor
Binged this webtoon (is this a webtoon?) it’s so dark and interesting but also funny and sarcastic. The 3D BACKGROUNDS and character designs ahhh it’s cute how Porcia wants to solve this mystery but I get more and more worried for them. I’m scratching my head what made Sleepy hate the military so much?? To make matters worse that mask man is creeping on them omggg
sovember
Ahhh I’m so glad to hear that I’m glad you enjoyed it thank you for binging!
It is technically webtoon style, but it’s going to be on webtoons sometime soon! Just tweaking earlier pages. I’m always happy some of y’all find this site I only advertise it on Instagram and soon comicAd haha.
Yeah Sleepy has bad experiences with the military in her hometown! We’ll see lots more on that later, she’s going along with this cause she’s real good friends with Porcia!
OtterChaos
STOP WATCHING MOVIES. THEY HAVE TO GET THE **** OUT OF THERE
sovember
XD Exactly
LaterGaytor🏳️🌈
Porcia caring about the monster is cute 💜💜
sovember
She doesn’t like any body getting hurt monsters included 😀
Henson
This update was briloliant!! Answered a lot of my questions about the military and what earlier scenes meant. I read your other story ‘Live Yasha’ and I can’t help but notice Lin and Sin are both similar in a few ways. Cocky guys with green pallets. Can’t wait for the next update.
sovember
I’m glad you think so thank you Henson!! I’m glad it answered those questions :D, plan to answer some and raise a few more haha.
LOL that’s a really funny point. Their names are even similar. I’d say you’re spot on, only difference is Lin really very rarely gets angry, he’s a smooth salesman type lol. Sin is a bit of a hothead but also has that confidence whether earned or not xD. I like them both lol
Can’t wait to show y’all what’s next! A bit of a glimpse at Porcia and Sleepy’s relationship, her fear of her leaving her! Thanks for reading/commenting 😀
Karen K
AAAAAAAA
sovember
Couldn’t have said it better 😂
Midorii23
yes 12 horrific murders that great news lady…🤷 I want a holographic screen rings
sovember
She’s just…enthusiastic XD
I want some Bayesian rings too 😀
Sarah Depressed gay person
WOW I love the worldbuilding and snappy dialogue. Iri is kind of scary looking but ALSO kinda … 👀
sovember
Thank you so much!!tbh I really haven’t even gotten close to showing some of my fav parts of this story yet (i must find ways to clone myself lol) ,so it’s really great to hear y’all like the worldbuilding/dialogue :D.
Iri is intimidating, she has a very strong sense of justice and takes her job really seriously haha, but she can be nice too if she thinks you’re not a fool lmao. Iri’s def pretty I don’t blame you XD
myname123
Lin is going to die the moment we’re introduced to him LMAO. I find Sleepy fascinating, she’s snarky but seems to know more than she lets on. Btw I reread and had my mind blown…you really thought of every little detail didn’t you.
sovember
He had a few quips right XD. Nah he’ll be fine…maybe lol.
Oh wow always great to hear someone reading let alone rereading it! Thank you that means so much! full disclosure all my stories are part of my constant obsessive daydreams/paracosm so i put a lot of thought into it whether i like to or not XD.
I really appreciate it though I hope to do some crazy foreshadowing in the future, hopefully it pays off!
myname123
That’s really fascinating. I’ve never heard of the word paracosm till now but that makes so much sense. I wonder how many people have “paracosms”.
sovember
Yeah I’ve always been building multiple paracosms since I was little. I was very introverted and artsy haha, and they just fascinate me. When I told a friend about this he was like “what the hell how is that possible”, he’s super smart and into physics and stuff but can’t conceive making Lord of the Rings esque style worlds in your head and I’m like “it’s so easy bro” XD. Now I’m doing a lot of random things these days but the habit just never stops if that makes sense? It’s just something I can always do and build which is why I can be a bit air headed lol. I love it though it I wonder if lots of people have paracosms!
Thorfin1111
I have feeling things are darker than they appear in Paradise. That news reporter is creepy.
sovember
Great point! this is Paradise 003, there’s lots of Paradises and I can tell you many of them are pretty dystopian lol. Paradises in general have gotten marginally better overall for but they also only have livable conditions cause of some exploitation and other dark shenanigans going on under the rug somewhere else.
This Paradise is legitamately a decent place to live for most of the people here mostly thanks to Lucia and others leadership but also just verrryy lucky circumstances and favoritism from the grand council (they get invested a lot more!).
We’ll see more dark underbelly stuff in Paradise 002, I really can’t wait 😀
Wyuaang
What is Sleepy’s damage there HAHA.
sovember
She…just really doesn’t like the military XD.
Y’all obviously can’t hear it but the way Makana (that soldier) said it did have a bit of a condescending accusatory tone to it and she was looking directly at Sleepy too. Sleepy does not like being overanalyzed or interrogated by the military for reasons we’ll see. But yeah these soldiers aren’t doing anything too unreasonable, Sleepy is just on edge 🙂
Miaubol
-News: “Carnage… beast… Doesn’t it excite you?!”
-People: *keeps on not getting excited
This world is just so fucked up ;D
-“Don’t worry the monter’s okay”
LOL! “…What?” indeed xD
sovember
If there’s a segment that captures the insanity of the world in a couple panels that might be it ;D
Hahaha, Porcia being her dorky self in this dark world cracks me up too XD
Patsy
big fan been eyeing this. can’t wait to see what happens next.