Published On: October 5, 2021

37 thoughts on “Chapter 1: Page 3”

  1. 本山姫子

    very scary monster. great effects

    1. sovember

      Thanks so much!! I love Clip Studio’s tools for fx haha 🙂

  2. Noa 🌸

    I love these girls they’re so funny lol. I hope they don’t get hurt

    1. sovember

      I’m so glad you like them! I wanted them to start off coming across as some pretty recognizable personality types but I can’t wait to show more of what their about! Thanks for reading 🙂

  3. hhhhhhhh777777

    lovely 💕 this feels like an cool young adult animation. i like how free spirited Poria is. And to boot these cute little girls can apparently BRING THE HEAT

    1. sovember

      Thank you 😀😀 I am totally trying to get this animated one day. I’m glad you like her! She’s a got a caring nature , helps and is liked by a lot of the citizens, at the same time she REALLY wants out haha. You are certainly right about that 🤣

  4. Rock Shock

    🤣🤣 The monster being stuck makes me laugh for some reason. Unexpecte.

    1. sovember

      Hahaha, I’m glad you think so ! I don’t know what was going through my head at the time writing that, maybe just wanted something unusual lol

  5. jaKeah_odia

    I’d just leave life if this happened to me. Do those tunnels run through the whole city?

    1. sovember

      SAME! Ah great question! We will find out soon 🙂

  6. JinxPokem0nToz

    the purple ones eyebrows are powerful

    1. sovember

      LOL Sleepy has definitely got powerful eyebrows 🙂

  7. Kira77

    Aye, this is just a normal day for them giant ass monster and all loool ┐(￣ヘ￣)┌

    1. sovember

      Porcia and Sleepy definitely have an unusual daily routine lol!

  8. CarlWheez

    Is that wendigo ?

    1. sovember

      Definitely inspired by that legend! In story it’s a different creature 🙂

  9. herotown

    !!!

  10. Somare2

    This is SO interesting so far. I wonder if those mosnters are part of some underground conspirarcy so something 🤔

    1. sovember

      Thank you so much!! You are also onto something with the “conspiracy” point

  11. coolbli

    Cute and scary collide . Tired looking girl is a true friend for casually agreeing to this lol.

    1. sovember

      Haha Sleepy is indeed a very good friend xD. That is exactly what I’m going for in this part of the story I’m glad you think so lol

  12. kkl

    cool whats next

  13. QueerMeer

    Are those rings full of electricity or something???

    1. sovember

      That’s a great guess 🙂 . They’re called Bayesian rings we’ll learn more about ’em soon

  14. Dredd

    Is there more of this? I really like the story so far :3

    1. sovember

      I’m glad you think so! Yes more is on the way very soon 🙂 . Thanks for reading Dredd

  15. Ink23yd

    They are pretty damn fearless Owo

    1. sovember

      Indeed!! They’ve done this sort of thing a lot lol

  16. Miaubol

    The two girls are like …not really scared at all, all this is just some sort of fun game for them ..?

    Cool monster design :))

    1. sovember

      Haha, yeah they are certainly fearless.

      Glad you think so!! There’s gonna be a lot of crazy critters in this story lol. Can’t wait to show yall!

  17. KembGenshin

    love it

    1. sovember

      Glad to hear Kemb, :DD Next update soon! Sorry for late approve/reply thanks for reading!

  18. Cure Su

    zoo wee mama this story went from 0 – 100 FAST. I’m not complaining this is f*cking intrsting 🔥😳🔥

    1. sovember

      Hahaha I’m glad you think so xD. There’s some batsh*t insane stuff coming this and next chapter I can’t wait to show yall

      Sorry for the late comment approval! Next update is out 😀

  19. feezyfeez

    💀 how calm they are has me deaddd lmao

  20. dfasdfa

    Oh hell this is hella creepy!

  21. XMC Portal

    You cannot escape the responsibility of tomorrow by evading it today. -Abraham Lincoln

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