Published On: November 22, 2023

24 thoughts on “Chapter 2: Page 13

  1. ZOINKS! BLOOD! This story is amazing.

    1. NOT GOOD. Thank you so much!! 😀

  2. Oh girls. You do act like teenagers, the rebellionousness, the strange but valid hobbies that are derided by most. And the snark. Though house arrest for years must be slightly disproportionate!

    Okay, I’m not an expert…but that cannot be good. Now I need to know what’s going on and how this ties into the masked ghoulies we were with for the last few pages. Chop chop ‘Sovember’ 😛

    1. Strange hobby is definitely a way to put it lol. To be fair Sleepy is almost always snarky 😂, her experiences with the military don’t help either! Very unlikely she will trust or work with them willingly any time soon, even though Sleepy does admit Paradise 003 is better than here home Paradise on a macro level

      That’s a pretty intense level of grounding your daughter! Oo I can’t wait to show you guys how everything ties together here at the end of the case! Though some things will probably remain unanswered too 😛

  3. Aw, come on, Sleepy’s earned that latte! Think she’s definitely going to need one by the end of this!

    1. Hahaha 😂 Sleepy absolutely has earned that latte after this!

  4. Sly_freaking_carpet

    😭 The poor baby can’t catch a break

  5. The last is something out of my nightmare!!! You’re going to need that therapist again after this

  6. The dialogue on this page is snappy and quick. I understand both sides of and where they’re coming from. And my God it’s all coming crashing down at the end of the episode. What horrors are seeping through the ceiling?

    1. Thank you so much! I had fun writing this page :D.

      Oh yeah, soldiers aren’t gonna budge they are too afraid of disobeying the Queen! Porcia are Sleepy pretty adament on solving this case now, and they are pretty experienced with evading the military but unfortunately they are stuck with these young soldiers 😛

      Can’t wait to show y’all the next page 😀

  7. “I’ll be under arrest for years.” Holy crap…The Queen has had ENOUGH

    1. Oh yeah, house arrest for years might be….much. Tho The Queen has delt with Porcia disobeying her a lot haha. Porcia is very charming but can’t help getting into danger and breaking the law in mostly innocuous ways while chasing fun things 😂

      I can’t wait to show y’all more of their relationship and what’s going to come from all this !

  8. LaterGaytor🏳️‍🌈

    Porcia is so cute and irresponsible 🙃😂

    1. Very true she is haha. So many people in Paradise 003 like her a lot, a lot of royal personalities are pretty bad in this world but Porcia’s very kind!

      Her mom won’t let her cuteness prevent her from bringing the hammer down tho 😛

  9. Omg what an ending. So someone is cruel enough to have devised all of this sadisticness. ☹ I wonder if it was Dr.Sigmund ?

    1. Absolutely, whoever is behind this is pretty nasty!

      Who knows, great question though :D. We shall see soon, what I can say is the masked figure from befores did refer to Dr.Sigmund briefly as if neither of them were him!

  10. They’re just doing their job, but they’re ruining all the fun jaja. I wonder why Sleeps hates the military so much.

    1. Followin’ those orders :P. Oh yeah, Sleepy has major beef! to be fair if I was in this world I would probably be at the very least very distrustful of most of the military in this world haha. Might be more evident why when we see more of them and move to other Paradises with different cultures 😀

  11. Uh-oh..O.O

    I must admit I really do worry about Porcia’s sanity, when she just talks about all this monster stuff (including people getting killed) as “fun”.
    So I guess I can see where the queen is coming from ..?

    1. Right? not good D:

      That is definitely a good point given what we’ve seen from Porcia! She doesn’t want people to get killed, but she got into this whole thing really mostly cause she only cared about seeing a cool monster above all else! Which given the circumstances is worrying indeed.

      Yeah, Queen Lucia has her own flaws n’ eccentricities but she’s not being too unreasonable! She’s known for being very calm and fair Queen to most people, though maybe…a little too overprotective of her girls haha. Can’t wait to show y’all more of both of ’em 😛

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